Assignment 4 : Exchanging opinion

Here is the assignment 4.

Please read Minori's writing and exchange your opinions with classmates. 

I would love to see your respectful, thoughtful, and creative opinions. Multiple comments to exchange among classmates are very welcome!!

                                     November, 24th

                                        Minori Kimura

"Relationship between eyesight and personal relations like the weather"

      Today, I'm going to write about relationship between eyesight and personal relations like the weather. Key tool is glasses and contact lenses. there is my friend's experience.

       My eyesight was low. So, I couldn't see around and couldn't communicate with other people. I was afraid of any people because I couldn't understand person's expression. I became retiring and alone. I wished I had talked each other, but I didn't find a way to have relations with other people.

        Do you understand my suffering? Anyway I wanted to escape from fear and loneliness, but I did nothing but ran away. It was as if I had wandered aimlessly in the dark rain. My parents worried about me.

        One day, my parents gave me a pair of glasses, and I put on it. My eyesight was recovered by it, and I came to be able to see around. I was very surprised because I didn't know about glasses at all. I was very glad, and my feeling became good. Also, I came to talk with several people. However, my face was not original because I was wearing glasses. It was as if I had walked in the light rain.

        Next year, my parents gave me contact lenses. I was frightened of wearing contact lenses, but I tried to put in it. As a result, I could see around without glasses. It was as if the weather had changed sunny. Now, I actively talk with many people and have good personal relationship.

        I think glasses or contact lenses are important tools that make good personal relations for people who have low eyesight.

Assignment3: Naoki Honda, Yu-ka Matsumura, Daishiro Wasada

“Love feeling like a growth of tomato”

   First, I was ashamed of contacting other girls when I was junior high school student.
So, I couldn't talk with them , but my seating position was next to other girl.
One day, I had to speak to her in class, and I tried not to see her as possible as I can.
However, I gave her such attitude.
She was friendly to me, so  I got interested in her.

     Second, I absolutely fell in love with her because I looked to her naturally. In my heart filled with love for her. We went out together many times, and it was very very happiness. I thought that I want to go out with her. It is as if tomato grown a little and became orange color. Tomato grows and swells little by little. This is just the same as love.

    Final, Love for her expanded. Although We have had going well and wrong, I communicate my feelings for her. It is as if tomato endured a heavy rain and a strong wind and grew a big red form. Because I thought we were attracted to each other, I confessed her with confidence. As resalt, I could come true that I go out with her.

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Autumn comes, red leaves are very beautiful， but many leaves are fallen.

I  studied hard. So, I got many knowledge and confidence. Those motivated me to the next pre test which is the same style of entrance examination. And then,  I took pre test. However, the test was harder than  what I thought, and  I got low score many subject. So, he lose confidence and got depressed.

Assignment 3：Hiromitsu, Kei, yuki

Utida yuki, Higuchi Kei, Saitou hiromitsu

“A relationship between growth of human and jewelry”

   Today, I'm going to write about relationship between human growth and jewelry. There are three steps.

    People are similar with jewelry.
People have an original characteristic that other people don't have. For example,  there are  build and face and weight, thought. The stone is the same, too. For instance, scale and hardness and shape, bright. These characteristic never change for life.

    If we compare a stone which become a jewelry growth of human, while cutting and giving  it a polish is like a school days. Stones are changed good one by shaving and polishing. school life gives me a lot of experience like a knife. Character is influenced by other people like a diamond. for example, students do but action then they are got angry at by a teacher and friend.
Many kind of experiences make it refine in this way.

    Each polished stone shine and give various people joy and impression. For example, the stone become a ring, the other stone is decorated with an exhibition. These stone think "This is a place where I can shine most." Craftsman get joy and it become the vitality to work by knowing that. Both of stone and craftsman are so happy. It is like a students and teachers.

    Human is like a jewelry, and jewelry is similar to human. It is up to you whether you polish it, or you do not polish it.

Assignment3,yukiko kutsuzawa, yudai nakamaru, masato sotokawa

   ”Stadying for entrance examination such as cherry tree in three seasons”

Today, we are going to write about stady for entrance examination. There are 3 steps that my stadying days. It's like just a cherry tree.

   Autumn comes, red leaves are very beautiful， but many leaves are fallen.

I  studied hard. So, I got many knowledge and confidence. Those motivated me to the next pre test which is the same style of entrance examination. And then,  I took pre test. However, the test was harder than  what I thought, and  I got low score many subject. So, he lose confidence and got depressed.

   It becomes cold, and cherry tree dropped most of the leaves. I troubled. I lost he hope to success in an examination. It was snowing, and the snow fell on my heart. I couldn't get the score in pretext, and my heart had been broken like branches. I had to do my best, but my feeling was very hard. I want to avoid this situation. Then, one of a few friends said to me. "Try again and again!! You must endure it now." These words helped me, and the tree has begun to set up a root. "A little more, a little more. I must endure!!" I said to myself. The time of examination which to enter the university approaches.

    Of cause cherry tree remaind bare a long time, and thare were a lot of hard problems. However it was going to brossom someday.

  In this case, ”someday” was the day annauncement of the entrance examination results.

  I was troubled very much before the day like dead tree. 

  At last, the annauncement day came. I thought I fail certainly. The cherry tree that dream full brossom beautiflly and store powers during fall and winter didn't come out, and the efforts were in vain.

  Then, I heard my friend's voice with joy.

 ”You PASS!” 

”Reary!?”

  I found my seat number, and his voice brought me the worm spring breeze. I was just like full cherry brossom. 

  In Japan, there is a saying, ”SAKURA SAKU,” and it means ”pass the entrance examination.” So, to told the result to my pearent, I mailed this word ”SAKURA SAKU.”

Assignment:3 Katsuya, Ayana, Ken

"The lives of ours competition sports and shoes"

    First In junior high school, I started track and field. At first , I have tried again and again, but it will not go well. I thought that it will go well for the first time. Of course, no one can do it well from the beginning. However, more practice hard, more I feel enjoyed little by little. Even if the training so hard, I endure it. Because I wanted to get better at track and field, and it like a new shoes for beginning.

    Second, I continued my favorite sport. I got absorbed in it. I practiced a lot, so my ability for competition improve. When I gave a result, I was glad and fun. I practiced more. I could make an effort. This good situation is like my favorite shoes. My shoes, which I've got accustomed to using, spend with me since I began to play sport. My shoes and I grow up together, so we are good condition.

     Finally,I have an experience of the failure.  When I was a junior high school student, I belonged to Track and Field club.  One day, My waist was broken by the body contact in the soccer game. Until my injury, I have had a good running form, great achievements and the feeling enjoying running. Since that,I felt I lost my positive motivation.Then, I felt taht I was thrown away and  wasn't needed by everyone as if I had been a broken shoes.

Assignment 3:kohei,yukina,minori

Group member:Kohei Arai , Minori Kimura , Yukina Hori

"Relationship between eyesight and personal relations like a weather"

 

My eyesight was low. So I couldn't see around and couldn't communicate with other people. I was afraid of any people because I couldn't understand person's expression. I became retiring and solitude. I wished I had talked each other. But I didn't find a way to communicate with other people.
  Do you understand my suffering? Anyway I wanted to escape from fear and loneliness. But I did nothing but ran away. It was as if I had wandered aimlessly in the rain.

 

One day, I eventually got a pair of  glasses. My eye sight is recovered by glasses. By my eyesight is recovered, I can see around so much better with my glasses. So I become lighter than I who is suffered terrible pain from loneliness. I feel growing up my communication skills. But I'm not satisfied with all things which surround me. I don't have confidence in my face covered with glasses.It was as if I had wandered in the light rain.

 

Finally I met contact lenses. At first, I was afraid of wearing contact lenses. But I weared them bravely. Then, my world changed as if rain stopped and it was sunny. The glasses which were obstructive were not necessary. I threw away the umbrella, and felt my both hands became free. So, I came to be able to run and play the ball without hesitation.

 



Assignment 3:Kazuya,Joe,Genki,Shino

My group member:Kazuya Inomata, Joe Kodama, Genki Hamaya, Shino Tabata

"Relationship between one girl and me like a growth of one dandelion "

 Our first contact was like a encounter of the dandelion's seed and the ground. Because the encounter was accidental.

 One day, we entered the elementary school. At that time, I met one cool girl named Mei. Mostly students who entered this school were from same kindergarten. But Mei was from other kindergarten. Because she moved in from far place when we entered the elementary school. So I think that our encounter was so accidental. 

※This sentence was written by Kazuya Inomata

 From first grade to third grade, I seldom talked with her because we didn't have much relationship. We belonged to different groups and played with each friends. But, when we became fourth grade, we were same class. A few months later, we changed seats position in that class. As a result, my new seat position was next to her one. From this event, our relationship started to grow up! At first, we only greeted. For example, "Hi, good morning, good bye". However we started to talk and know each other . We got along better and better together day by day. We used to talk about each favorite things, weekend, vacation. 

※This sentence was written by Joe Kodama

 We became fifth grade. At that time, Mei had already become very close friend to me. When we were fourth grade, we only played games and sports or had a lunch together in the school. But we became to meet any place other than the school. For example, we went to the sea and the summer festival during summer vacation. Fire flowers which we saw at summer festival were very beautiful. Our relationship grew splendid through these events.

※This sentence was written by Genki Hamaya

 However, it was difficult to keep friendship between boy and girl when we became junior high school students. Because everybody have begun to be conscious of each other as the opposite sex. Therefore, a boy and girl who get along well were made fun by other friends. From these reasons, distance of our feeling became far as if dandelion's seed flew away by the wind... 

※This sentence was written by Shino Tabata

 A few months later, she has moved far away by the reason of the family. So even our real distance became also far. I don't know her information now. But I believe that she will grow splendid relationship at the new place as we did. 

※This  is conclusion sentence which was written by Kazuya.

Assignment3 yuhei,Hiroki,Miharu

In the elementary school, I am like a seed of sunflower. 

Do you know why?

I can not do anything alone and need much suppurt. For ewample, my parents makes me relax, teacher give me knowledge, also I learn how to live in the community by making freinds.

I don't have a fear because I am not in the society. The reason why I am protected from threat by supporters and spend happy dairy life.

Therefore, I don't need to think about future.

It  means I don't have a dream and I graduate elementary school.

In the junior high school, l am like a sprout of sunflower because I started choosing myselves and I gave up my dream again and again because I didn't have strong will. When Iwas junior high school student, I chose some  subjects to want to study. It is as if a sprout which is shoots out sprouts toward the sun. However a sprout is too little so it can't be found and it is easily crushed. Likewise I was not recognized and I gave up my dream because I lost confidence. And I repeated same things. Ultimately I shoots out sprouts toward next step which is high school life.

In the high school,I am like a sunflower that continues extend the stem. Because three years of high school life isgiven for me many opportunity and experience.

I met so many unique person and got along with their. In these days,I learned sense of responsibility. Sometimes I felt angry,sad,enjoy,and happy. These feelings brought up me so much. This is similar to the sunflower.because, sunflower's stem grow up to the higher and higher. Sun is like my dream and sunflower is like me. So I want to grow up toward the dream. Someday, my dream come true at the same time sunflower is bloom. 

Assignment 3

Please add your writing and share with your classmates.

After reading your classmates' writing, please feel free to revise your sentences and make the change.